静茹的歌 发表于 2006-11-12 16:56:59

<原创>街上的种种

镜头一:
When I and my sisters and brothers were eatting some food.Suddently,a boy was coming.
He said:"Do you want to buy some flowers?"
"No,thanks"
"Can you give me one yuan."
"Why do want one yuan?"
"Because,I am so hungry.And I don't have anything for a long time.If you give me,I will thank you for many times."
"Where are your parents?"
"Em^^^^^^my parents are in Tianjin."
"Where?Tianjin?Really?"
"Yes."
"Ok.We will take you to the police station."
"No,thanks.I just want to get one yuan.Thanks very much."
Suddently,we saw a woman near him.
We all knew what happened.
镜头二:
While we were eatting food too.An old woman was coming.
She looked at us,said:"Can you give me some money."
"Yes,but I don't have change."
"Do you want to eat food.But we have eatten."
"No,thanks."
Then,she went away.
镜头三:
"Mr and Mrs,can you give me some food?"An old man said."
"Why?Ok,I have some water.Do you want to drink some"My brother said.
"Ok,no problems."
"A?^^^"
Finally,we looked at each other.

静茹的歌 发表于 2006-11-18 22:06:49

HOHO,不知道有没有语法错误啊.

氢氧化钠 发表于 2006-11-18 22:07:45

看不到呀　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

听鱼唱 发表于 2006-11-18 22:11:05

"Why do you want one yuan?"

静雅茹莉 发表于 2006-11-18 22:12:07

我的英语最糟糕
勉强看吧

巫熹 发表于 2006-11-18 22:28:29

this is English !!!!!!!!!
杀了我吧``

静雅茹莉 发表于 2006-11-18 22:29:06

我和你一起吧

顺其自然 发表于 2006-11-18 22:29:27

哈哈，我干脆不看

直接 路过

巫熹 发表于 2006-11-18 22:29:58

不过最近打英语`我挺快的类`~嘿嘿`

fishsound 发表于 2006-11-18 22:30:30

加上我一个
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